Friday, July 10, 2009

3...2..1..Contact















I have two versions for this one. I drew the large one first , and I like it,but I also like the reframed , shorter one.
What do you guys think?

18 comments:

Martin Brennand said...

I love the scene of the first one, but the smaller one makes it so much more intimate, which I guess is what you're going for!

Love the daily updates by the way. :)

DAVID WILSON said...

I agree with Martin, eliminating the negative space brings you into the moment, especially with the plant on the left for a lead-in.

Think I'll go home and kiss my wife again...and again. etc

Emil said...

I kinda love the bigger one ....
Love the colors as usual, and the lighting too... brilliant work, Mr. Campion!

Faboun'e said...

Great Space, Great art ...
Be back for see all your works..
just made a link on my blog..

Joseph said...

There is an intimacy with the small one but the composition of the larger one is nicer.
Love all the couple stuff you're doing lately. Keep it up!

Kacey said...

Both are nice, but I heart the larger one!

Anonymous said...

I like more the second,
I think that It has a great composition and creates a better environment for the couple.
Your art is so inspiring.

Unknown said...

second (:

tammywith2 said...

I'm diggin' the larger one too. The composition is really nice.

SHOo said...

The square one! I love the square one!

Wayne B. Medina said...

i like the larger one myself :)

jessicadrhp said...

i love the larger version (:

pascal said...

Thanks guys!
Ha. the opinions are really mixed. I've gotten a bunch of emails as well as replies here and on Facebook... roughly half like the large one, and the others the small one, but, for the same reason. That's interesting!
Thank you for all that feedback. this is great!

rina said...

that's a hard decision. as always when two versions exist. I prefer the large one. I like the colours and composition and in my opinion it has a more interesting atmosphere. Well, the small version is good as well, but as a watcher you immediately look at the couple. This is a pity for the background, because you paid so much attention to it.

haha, sorry, wacky english. hope you got what I meant anyway.

pascal said...

Rinaj..no worries.. I understand!
Thank you.

matthieu said...

First one. More intimist!

pascal said...

merci Matthieu!

Kernit the Font said...

I like the larger one. The light seems to act almost like a third person in the scene.