Ooh! I really like this one. It reminds me of when I lived in a little apartment with no balcony and I would crawl out on the fire escape in the summer. I even watched 4th of July fireworks from the same fire escape with my brother. It is a great memory!
She crawled to the fire escape. She needed some fresh air, an extra piece of breath. The height was too much to stand up. So she pushed herself against the wall, keeping her head up, And looked at her favorite stars in the sky illuminated. The stars kept blinking, Signaling the words "c'mon, some courage". She shook her head, meaning her body too much trembled.
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Ooh! I really like this one. It reminds me of when I lived in a little apartment with no balcony and I would crawl out on the fire escape in the summer. I even watched 4th of July fireworks from the same fire escape with my brother. It is a great memory!
Those stories, they sound like this:
She crawled to the fire escape.
She needed some fresh air, an extra piece of breath.
The height was too much to stand up.
So she pushed herself against the wall, keeping her head up,
And looked at her favorite stars in the sky illuminated.
The stars kept blinking,
Signaling the words "c'mon, some courage".
She shook her head, meaning her body too much trembled.
-Z.
Thanks Tera.
Blue Zeppeling...Ha.. these are cool lyrics!
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